Thursday, 25 October 2012

Science Fiction Flash Story

I am currently taking a Science Fiction and Utopia class during my Literature MA and am loving it. One assignment I had was to write a very short story (only 1,000) words pertaining to the science fiction ideas of society - think 1984, Orwell.  I finished this last week and have since submitted it to the professor.  We also had to write a commentary, to explain why and how what I wrote was science fiction idea of society, but I have not included that here.  Mostly it pertains to the history of the world I created, and honestly I want to keep that to myself in case I want to continue writing in that world.  Here is the short story:


“Skål” shouts every person in the bar, clinking glasses together.

The chairman of the Gunvaldsson-Preem Oil Al Sherika stands up to make his Al Hijra speech.

“It has been a good year for the GPOS, we have made new partnership agreements with Arabian Oil, and thanks to lobbying with the Al Urdun government we are now allowed to trade with Jordanian Britain and France,” pausing for emphasis he continues “however, before I let you return to celebrations we must remember we have goals for the coming year. GPOS is attempting to buy the rights to an ex-soviet pipeline. It was partly destroyed during the Revolution, Alhamdulillah, but the Al Urdun is considering allowing it to be repaired.” He points to a couple of managers in the room “and we want that contract, Inshallah” he pauses again taking a deep breath and recites a short prayer of thanks for Al Hijra, the new year.

When the moment of silence had elapsed he proclaimed “alright everyone, happy new year and I hope to see you all in good health on Monday morning.”

The whole room claps respectfully and the hum of conversation returns. This is one of the two times a year the employees are allowed out of work for anything other than praying, at the mosque (for men), or at home (for women). Andie knows that she is only allowed to meet publically because Sweden is so far from the center of the Al Urdun empire. Here the two sexes are allowed to work, and occasionally socialize despite the strict Sharia Law. There are, unfortunately, growing rumors this behavior will not be tolerated by the new government.

Andie sits at the back of the room that used to be a bar and contemplates this rumor. She can't seem to get as excited as everyone else about Al Hijra. She is upset that even her native words are being used in such a restricted way. “Skål” means “toast” sure, but she should be toasting to a good new year with family. But she can't. Not since her father was taken by Sharia Police three years ago for having a book on world history pre-Occupation.

She taps her glass of doough with her neighbour's and takes a gulp of the yoghurty drink with ice and mint. She wonders when the last time this bar was a place of debauchery like the government portrays of Western American life. Probably not since the Occupation. No one else in this room would likely call the fifty year period of Al Urdun empire ruling Sweden “the Occupation,” more likely they would call it the Great Islamic Revolution or just Revolution. Her mouth is suddenly very dry. She takes a refreshing sip, remembering the images of old Sweden in her father's book.

“What's wrong Rasima?” comes from across the table at Andie.

“Nothing, just thinking about the amount of work to do once New Year's is over. What are you thinking about Ebrahim?”

“Oh same as you, although I am excited to meet the woman who my mother and father have chosen for me to marry, Inshallah” Andie smiles at this, secretly glad that her brother has no intention of marrying her off as if she is some sort of property to be sold. At least their father taught them that, before he was taken. Her father called her Andie and her brother Bengt-Arne as their private rebellion to the Occupation. To everyone outside their family, including Bengt-Arne's wife, she is known as Rasima, her brother as Hussein.

She looks over at Ebrahim, “Do you think you will be married this year? The mullahs say it is an auspicious year for marriage”

Ebrahim thinks for a moment as he sips his doough. He is a spiritual man who seems respectful and honest. His face looks strong, tan and youthful now but Andie predicts that he will look drawn and tired as soon as he begins to grow his beard after marriage.

“Well so far my mother and father, Inshallah, have not chosen the best women for me. The first one was pretty enough, but her family had a history of mental illness that my parents said should be overlooked. Since I am the oldest and will be the man of the family when my father dies, my wife should not have depression in her genes. And although she said she was 20 but Age Test confirmed she was nearly 23, too old” he takes another sip and looks Andie in the eye “It is amazing how women still try to lie about their age.” Then he casually adds “When will your brother choose a husband for you?”

Andie knows this is becoming a frequently asked question. Since her brother is married and has many children, there is really no need for her to do the same. She knows that her boss will not put up with having a single woman in the office of her age. Once she has been fired she will eventually pass an Age Test checkpoint on the street and the Sharia Police will take her.

“I know my brother is looking for someone perfect, and I only have to wait, Inshallah, for the right man” she responds after a moment.

“Well he had better not wait too much longer, or...” and he lets the sentence drop off. Andie begins to think maybe he isn't as respectful as she had originally thought. The fact that he would allude to her age or even the sanitarium means he is rude at best. But she ignores this and smiles gently at him.

“I have many years before I need to worry about that” she lies, hoping her smile hid that one day soon they will try to forcibly sterilize her. In the Al Urdan Empire, any woman who reaches the age of 25 without having been married or producing offspring within marriage is sterilized and removed from society. This is just part of the skewed version of Sharia Law that was forced on Sweden during the Occupation. Most citizens go along with disappearances and limited rights. Andie can't blame those who have a natural desire to live. After World War III when the Al Urdun decimated Eastern Europe, there weren't many choices. But Andie has made a different choice: to find the rebellion and to help them, Inshallah.


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